Tuesday, December 23, 2008

Grace Responce

your citation was complete . Your fount was the same i think and you are getting great information sad thought but good. your notes are great. It was a sad articles thought . You are completely right why bring a child into this world if your going to treat like you stuff animal that you drag around .

Mardy's response

Your blog is pretty well put together and you have good information. I think that you picked a very good subject to research because it is important. I don't know how easy it will be for you to research this. It shocks me too that parents, gaurdians or any one would want to hurt kids. Good job so far. the green was somewhat easy to read

Danica's Response

Kianna- You took good notes on this article. The citation is complete and correct. And the title of the response is the same source of the information in the citation. The text is the same as the 5 paragraph essay, and the text color is the same in both articles and different from the 5 paragraph essay. The responses are in complete sentences, and so is the notes. The first blog post had more information, you should look into the toher article about the mother abusing her children more; it seems interesting.

Friday, December 12, 2008

Response on Palm Bay Woman

When I read this article, is shocked me. It completely took me by surprise, how a mother of 4, not just one child, but FOUR children would be able to abuse one of them, that we know for sure, bad enough for the 4-month old infant had a spiral imjury. Then blame it on her 20-month old daughter. That's ignorant, selfish, and hurtful. I don't understand why or how anybody, ecspecially parents of any aged children could abuse their child in any way, shape, or form. It's depressing and needs to stop. To me, if you don't want kids, which you obviosuly don't if you just abuse them, then use protection, don't have kids, and be responsible. The poor children could have had way better lives then what some parents are giving them, these days. :(

Thursday, December 11, 2008

Notes on Palm Bay Woman.

NOTES:

25 yr. old woman, Michelle Taylore, has a 4 week old son.

she got arrested, wed. 10, 2008; after taking son to hopital for spiral fracture in right leg.. detectives say caused by abuse!

woman had 3 other children.

charged for child abuse, making inconsistent statements;
blaming injury on 20-month old daughter.

Taylors children were taken into custody, and she was arrested.